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sexy gorgeous stunning goddess by ~miSSareY:iconmiSSareY:





Long dark fingers on my pale belly.

Can you feel it?
Feel what?
Feel how much I like you?


He looks bemused, and brings his lips to my ear.
I can feel a sexy soft tummy. That’s what I feel.

But do you feel the way my stomach flutters? Can you feel it bouncing shaking jumping with every breath I take? I feel like I have so much inside me and its trying to come tumbling out of my mouth without any warning.

And what are those gorgeous lips going to tell me?
Maybe I should use my lips and help you.

He props himself up on his elbows, and looks down at me.

No, these things should stay inside. I can’t trust these feelings. They’re stupid, reckless, wild. I gotta keep them there, see? Its better that way.  Safer.
I turn on my side; I feel his hand slips down my back.

Stretching out one finger, I traces down his jaw line.
He squirms at my faint touch, and I smile before saying
You really are wonderful.

I know I am. But you’re beautiful. You are my sexy gorgeous stunning goddess.

He kisses me.

Did that make it easier for you?
Easier for me to tell you?
What were you going to tell me?

I am taken aback. You know, the wild crazy feelings I have inside.
Oh, yeah. That too.
Okay. But you have to promise not to be scared.
I won’t. You could never scare me, gorgeous.

What I wanted to say was, that-
I love you.
Is that all?!
He chuckles at me. I love you too hun.
No, it’s much more than that. I love you so much that I ache, all the time. I’m out with my family and friends, but I’m never there. I’m right here, holding onto you.
I’m so afraid one day you’ll let go of me. And if that ever happens, I don’t know what I’m going to do.
You are my true love. My first love. You are all of my dreams manifested in one person. If I had to choose one person, in this whole world above everyone else, you know it would be you. I need you want you and love you all at the same time. You and I are perfect together. So perfect that I want to run around the city square, telling anyone. Because I feel as if everyone has to know I’m this happy.
And that it’s because of you. Because of you, the most sweet, sensitive, gorgeous, loving boyfriend I could ever have.


He’s looking at me, and he’s not saying anything.
You’re the one. The one. My only one. Do you get that now?
Yeah. Yeah I get it.
He withdraws his hand, and sits up.
What’s the matter? My voice is full of uncertainty.
Nothing. He lays back down, hands behind his head.
You do feel the same way right? I mean, I’d understand if you didn’t, I love you a lot… I don’t expect you to feel as strongly about me as I do about you, but you wanna be with me right??
Yes. I do.
Then everything alright.
Yeah. Everything’s alright.
He rolls to face me and gives a timid smile. I gotta go.
My heartstrings tear, right there and then.
Oh, okay… see you tomorrow?
Yeah. See ya.




You’re not coming back.
©2005-2009 ~miSSareY
:iconmissarey:

Author's Comments

ya ya ya.
i love this. alot. im quite proud of it. except, for the bit when shes telling him how she feels. it doesnt say enough.

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:iconani92:
Aww.. the end is so sad.
:iconsmik:
wow...I must say that's one of the most wonderful pieces I've ever read from you. I really like it. It has all the aspects of a rather uncertain and winded relationship.

The part where she's explaining how much she loves him is very weighty...that's what I like about it. Oh, and the end's really sad... but that's how it goes sometimes...

AMAZING!!! +fav
:iconladesigner:
Very nice!:clap::clap:well done my dear:D

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D'ont worry, bee happy!... :sun::hug::rose::frail:
"Rocks in the way? I keep all, one day I go to construct a castle..."
:iconmissarey:
awww, im sorry, but thats the only kinda endings i can do with feeling.
and thats where it had to go.
cause this is a piece about little mistakes.

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all I do is kiss you, through the bars of a rhyme.
:iconani92:
it's really sad, but i like it.
:iconmissarey:
:blushes: thank youuuuuuuuu
its very uncertain, they both want VERY different things from the relationship, and they both made very big mistakes by their actions, irreversible ones.

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all I do is kiss you, through the bars of a rhyme.
:iconsmik:
I totally agree with that!
:iconkallokain:
in so many cases thats wat ist xactly liek with teen relationships etc, gess alota ppl cus relate to it thas wat drew me to it alot, brilliant poem once again! :D :thumbsup:

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:iconmissarey:
hurray for teen stereotypes!!!
thanks so much for commenting and adding to your faves!!
wicked dandy-ness :aww:

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